Nice for your first animation.
Pardon me if I'm wrong, but reading through the comments, I saw that this is one of your first animations (whoever wrote that comment), and I thought in that perspective, being a noobie animater, good job.
But like others have said, the animation is choppy. My only other petpeeve complaint is that the cartoon was very slow moving and wasn't really anything more than an exparimental film.
I still say good job.